https://youtu.be/Avco1AEambI
I had really good feedback from my last elevator pitch post. The comments were really positive and said I had improved from the first time. I didn't see any comments suggesting anything to change, so I only made a couple minor tweaks. I tried to be more energetic about my product this time, and I tried to talk a little slower/more clearly. I noticed that the pitch was almost memorized by now, which is a good sign. I also noticed that I was more comfortable giving the pitch because I am more confident in my idea.
Hey Alison,
ReplyDeleteThe third time's the charm! You did a great job on your third and final elevator pitch. You can see how you have gotten more comfortable and laid back in front of the camera when you are making your pitch. I know that I have begun to feel more comfortable when I was making my last elevator pitch too.
Hi Alison. Wow! You went above and beyond in your elevator pitch! Compared to your first one, I have noticed tremendous improvement in your speech skills, including your projection, articulation, and positive attitude. If you were nervous in any way, I could not tell. If I were an investor, I'd be willing to hear more about your product and how I could help your idea become a reality.
ReplyDeleteHey Alision! Great job on your elevator pitch! You have really come a long way from your first two pitches. It seems that you are much more comfortable now than you were before, and that translates to more confidence in your idea! Overall great job on your last pitch very well done job.
ReplyDeleteHi Alison, I think you did a great job on your third elevator pitch. You seem to be more confident and composed this time around. It helps that you feel more confident in your idea because that will show when you are pitching your idea to future investors. Well done!
ReplyDeleteHi Alison, I really liked your elevator pitch. I think that you had a great improvement since the last one that you had posted for this assignment. You seemed much more comfortable in this pitch and it is really cool to watch. You are noticeably more energetic and you also talk slow so that it is easy for the audience to understand.
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