Pitch number 2
https://youtu.be/O97eWd_LR6k
Reflection- The feedback I got on my first elevator pitch was very positive, so I decided to tweak the original a little bit. One comment mentioned how my sticker business would be competing with an already saturated market and online companies, so I tried to further address that in this pitch. I made a point of how my stickers would be more customizable and eliminate shipping costs associated with buying online. Also buying in person would allow the customer to see the product before purchasing it, which they cannot do online. I thought that comment about the market was insightful and I tried to adjust my pitch to accommodate that.
Hi Alison, I thought this elevator pitch was a big improvement from the last elevator pitch that you had posted on the blog. I think that you are good with making it clear what you are trying to sell and the audience has a clear understanding of what message you are trying to send. I like that this is your pitch where you tried to adjust according to the comments that were made on the previous pitch.
ReplyDeleteHi Alison, your elevator pitch round two was very good just like the first one. I like the fact that you edited it in order to further explain your business and why it should sell. Being specific and giving details like that really helps to sell to a potential investor. Overall great job and way to use the criticism to tweak your pitch.
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